by LadyPearl Oct 6, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Take your gun and shoot my heart |
by Jason Meres
I love you style, but you keep switching from rhyming to non-rhyming. You have some wonderfully expressive lines, that are truly worth reading, and i'd love to see them perfected in form. |
by Atomic
Another great poem written so beautifully. There's really no complaints except for who you would rhyme the first two sentences and then not rhyme the next two. It was a bit off balance, but I like it anyhow. |
by Jesse James
I like it. |