Comments : Destroy Me

  • 19 years ago

    by Jesse James

    I like it.
    JJx

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Another great poem written so beautifully. There's really no complaints except for who you would rhyme the first two sentences and then not rhyme the next two. It was a bit off balance, but I like it anyhow.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I love you style, but you keep switching from rhyming to non-rhyming. You have some wonderfully expressive lines, that are truly worth reading, and i'd love to see them perfected in form.