O my god...this is DEEPER Than the other one...where do u get all of ur inspiration from....or this is all real...cuz if it is...good luck u have a lot to handle...5/5...keep it up...i want to c more from u...

Good job, though you seem to repeat "I" alot. Keep it up. third one done!

You do repat he word "I" a lot but otherwise, i think this is your best poemi've read yet! :)

That would seem to be a bad day.... anyway its nice venting.. well done

I like this, i think everyone feels like this at some point... normally mondays... lol... seriosly though i really like this, it's really well written !

Thanks for all your comments, i appreciate them !

xxx cici xxx

Amazing job. Very violence i say and thats how i feel today let me tell you that. once again very nice. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Jamie,
your poems are excellent you put all of your emotions in them and that what makes them so great! it seems effortless for you to write this well. I hope you dont have another bad day, cus i know the feeling and they jus SUCk lol you described it perfectly.. very talented writer! cannot wait for more 5/5 OVERALL! freakin awesone!

Oh so true. Totally agree with Britt^^ your emotion is out standing.
can't wait to read more of ur poems hun.
Chin up xoxox