Porcelain Doll (version 1)

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Oct 7, 2005


In the dark corner of my room lies a porcelain doll.
Her smile plastered on her delicate face, fake.
Her eyes ever so bright, showing her painted illusion.
Her dress envelops her, beautiful on the outside.

Rejected in her corner, the porcelain doll casts shadows.
Staring at me, her smile forever plastered.
Staring at me, her eyes following my every move.
Immobilized, she watches me night and day.

In her corner, she accumulates dust as years go by.
Still watching me, analysing me throughout my life.
Knowing my weaknesses, knowing my strengths.
Knowing who I really am, my identity stripped.

She sees my cries, emotions written on paper.
She hears my silent screams, echoed in the night.
She sees what other don't, only she knows me.
Rejected in her dark corner, she silently watches.

*never had a porcelain doll... they freak me out too much lol

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I have a lot, they sort of freak me out... i used to get one every birthday... :) good job!

    caR

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Lol bout the doll thing.
    but now i dont think i can look at mine anymore! this poem is kinda freaky but its still awesome (even if it means im minus sum porcelin dolls!) xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Okay now im serious freaked out by my doll:P cause it does that >.< and its so true... it just sits there i have its back truned to me cause it freaks me out but it was a gift from my gran so I have to have it out=S so yeh your poem is the prefect way to show the freakie ness of those dolls and its almost a way to express how we feel in day to day life ,..... wow okay im weird....dont mind me great work darlin

    Jenn x0x0x