by nikki Oct 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Why? Why did u do it? |
by amber
Very good i am sorry its true |
by Britney
Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. And im sorry that something that bad happend to you I also have a poem about my rape called "the first" great job though 5/5. xox |
by x Saiya
Wow.. |
by HansRik
This poem is very heartfelt, and emotive. It is excellently written, and the diction used is consistently efficient. I liked the structure and the imagery used. But I am sorry that you feel this way. Good luck, and well done! |
by Jason Meres
A powerful piece indeed, contentually sound and well spoken. |