I dont know...i think it could have been alot better if it had rhymed...this had ALOT of feeling behind it but it was simply written so therefore i think rhyming is nessacery but i dunno...other then that i think the emotion that went into this was GREAT you really got the point that you hate the guy and you want to know why he did it to you across good job

I think it was great, perfect rhyme or not, the feeling was very deep.

Good Writing!
beth

Thats sad

sorry if its true

great job !
i love it !
5/5

Why? I dunno, because he's a heartless bastard?

At first I thought the poem was gonna endi in something like, why did he stole your heart.

Very nice though.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Hi !
this is so beautiful nicole..yet so dark & explicit.. im glad u vent ur feelings out through a poem but i know these feelings hardly go away.,..
its a a terrible thing to live with.. i know
im glad your pulling through
god bless
lovely poem
gave u 5/5
love
amy

Good God girl....
I truly hope this did not happen ...
Never ..ever should anyone have to go through this ...
A very sad and emotional poem ..
Take care sweets ....

I am so very sorry for what has happend to you, i was almost in you shows a year ago but i was luck enough to get away i am sorry it did work that way for you. if you ever need to talk to some one fell free to email me any time 5.5

A powerful piece indeed, contentually sound and well spoken.

This poem is very heartfelt, and emotive. It is excellently written, and the diction used is consistently efficient. I liked the structure and the imagery used. But I am sorry that you feel this way. Good luck, and well done!

Wow..

That's just so sad.. I hate people who do things like this to other people, it is just horrible..

Great work, though, 5/5 well written:)

God Bless
Saiya

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. And im sorry that something that bad happend to you I also have a poem about my rape called "the first" great job though 5/5. xox

Very good i am sorry its true