Comments : TaKiNg ThE KiLlS

  • 19 years ago

    by Heidi

    Good workkk =D Keeep it upp!

    *Heidi

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Noing that they all where going to talk
    Correct this sentence please...thanks...

    And hey, glad your friend get you into this...you are so good...can't wait to see more from you...

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    That was great jeremy.
    I enjoyed reading it specially the beginning was very good.
    good choice of words.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    JEREMY!!! aaahhhh!!! i love this kid everyone! he rocks my flipping world! but yeah jeremy... i love this poem sooo much... you are seriously a natural!!! i'm putting this poem on my wall sometime and then maybe sometime you can come over and see it... lol oh and jeremy... thank you so much for your shout out!! yay i'm ganna do that too!! whoop whoop!!
    love you sooo much sweetie... your the bestest friend ever!!

    *.:morgan:.*

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow i just read ur poem it is really good...i wish mine were as good as urs...check mine out i wanna know what you think of it...does it suck bad i only have one...its called missing you...please comment i need someone to tell me if i suck lol well ur really good at writing poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Great poem