Well i have to say who ever gave you a 2 was outt of there mind you poem is amazing and i love it you did a great job with expressing your self and i think the words you used were just right keep up the good work 5.5

Yes i agree you expressed that terrible feeling of rejection good work

Great poem i really loved it

Strong poem... Really powerful emotions at work. Keep it up!!!
-Kate

P.S. You had a question about a poem I wrote, asking if it was based on truth or not, and the answer is yes -- those things did really happen.

Really great poem.. theres not much i can really pick at.. except the flow was a little off in places, but its still very well done.

Beautiful poem.I think it deserves more than 3.5 vote...
I especially like the final stanza, it ends the poem well !!

xxx cici xxx

Thats exactly how i feel about this guy named Tony, but i eventually got ovetr it by seeing the face of the one i truly love again, then i forgot totallu about Tony, which was good cause he liked my friend. anyways, great poem 5/5