by ShadowDancer Oct 7, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I understand your pain |
Nice one. The flow struggled at times, but nothing too bad. I can really relate to this. |
Emotion in that poem makes me feel sad... : ( |
by Chris Engle
Wow, very emotional, good job! it conveys your feelings well, and you did a great job with the spacing of it, adds a dramatic, yet organized, effect. |