Very well written! as an idea for a title?
Trapped? or somthing like that? it seems to be about that...

keep up the good work

Ruby

Hm...idk, I guess you could call it trapt or..something that makes you like imprisoned or something cuz in this poem, tha's what you sound like, a prisoner. but it was good. title or no title. 5/5

How about "Hoping for freedom"

Good poem by the way.
Tim