Nice poem, i really like it.
The detail is really good, i like the ideas involved with this poem.
Well written.

xxx cici xxx

I'm so lost but i really loved this poem got you so lost inside of it. So that makes it worth something i think. amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Dude! wtf?! this is absolutely NOT stupid....this is so brilliant! and original and i LOVE it! you have so much talent....stop being so hard on yourself! lol...keep up the awesome work....you're going on my faves =)

*hugs* i am here if you need to talk...

-brittnay-

WoW I honestly like that...It's truly not your best but, I'm still partially making sense of it in my mind...
Great Job
Ash
5/5

Wow. i was wondering who "you" was. i was rather suprised to find out the person was talking about themselves. 5/5

Wow!! i really like this poem..and your style of writing, you're awesome!!!
really great flow, stop putting yourself down hun, u're toog reat for that.
take care of urself xoxoxo