That was really good but I dont think you'll go to hell :)
Besides whats wrong with that anyway Matt shall have you
lol
see ya round suz

That was definately one of your best poems, I will go to hell and find you and bring you back for angels dont belong in hell.

I agree with matt, u dont belong in hell, however, the guy who did that to u does. this is one of your best. it has such a strong message. i love it
stay strong angel

Ruby

That was so excellent WOW!! MY friend here thinks it is aswell. I really must get time to read all of your poems. I've got to go i'm at school at the moment writing some more poems, thanks for dropping by keep the comments coming they really encourage me to write :)
xx

It's dark, it's long, it's full of emotion, but it's 2b2 rhyming, again the only thing that lets it down for me, great poem though.

Wonderful work. Brilliant job once again.

Wow...it's so deep so...iono the word for it but you got a lot of talent and you should get your poems published

YOu are a great story teller... your poems create visual effects... from poet to poet.... you got my attention.....

I thought that this was beautiful. I think that its talking about a lost friendship, though I could be wrong. I could find many other ways to interpret this. Keep up the good work. 5/5

That was awesome! I love reading your poems because they are so deep and they mean something to me deep inside myself. I feel i am reading my own diary when i read your poems
keep writing

love Tara-Kay

You never fail to put duch emotion into your pieces of writing. Hell,is not the place for you. This was a dark piece,probaly one of my favourites.

Kat

The last stanza was great.

Gave me a twisted little grin.

Wow...this is really good...5/5.
yup...i wrote that song myself...
thanks for the comments...^.^

Really nice job... good poem... keep up the good work 5/5

'In this place there is no light
my pain will soon be their delight
closer, i fall to the floor
As hell opens up it's jaws'

I don't know, but that stanza did not do it for me. It didn't flow with the rest of the poem, it only made a pause. The rest I loved! The rhymings were perfect, and the title matched the poem. Great!

Very gloomy, lol but thats the effect you wanted..Great job! Thank you for commenting on my song..I appreciate it!

Beautiful, touching, and truly deep. You are a wonderful writer. Keep it up, I will continue to read. If you ever need anyone to talk to e-mail me.
Always-
Shattered and Broken