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  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    This one is amazing. it catchs a feeling and puts it into words that no one can fail to understand

    the repeating of that one verse is extreamly effective

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Always Smiling

    All ur poems are amazing.... they have so much emotion in just a couple of words... fantastic writer
    luv always smiling oxoxo