Nobody Knows

by gorgeouslilmissy   Oct 7, 2005


One more time i say
tonight is the last time
i promise myself
i wont be part of this so
called crime.

pick up the nice shiny blade
press right down so deep can't believe whats in sight.
i really don't think i will make
it through the night.

tears rolling down my cheeks
as i lay and hold my pillow tight.
blood running from my wrists
i cant go on much longer, its to hard to fight.

nobody knows of this fear
i hold inside.
i am really sorry for what i
have become
i want to change everything
believe me, oh how i have tried.

its a new day and i pull
down my sleeve
nobody must know about
this silly mess
so to you my friend just close
your eyes this is something
that i cant confess.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    Great piece of poetry!
    (what more can anyone say?)

    loved everything about this, i really do... =))

    keep 'em coming
    jm

  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    Good job on this amazing poem..
    i can relate to this alot...
    *sighs*
    very talented
    xxxx
    abby

  • 19 years ago

    by .tiana ღ laura.

    Heyy thank you for commenting on my poem! i meant to click praise but i accidently clicked complain but then i clicked praise and im sorry... i dont know what the coimplain button does, but i didnt mean to hit it! but i really like your poem and its very beautiful... i hope you dont actually cut tho... because its a horrible way to deal with things. but its a topic of so many poems its insane!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's really hard...when you cut when you don't want to...I hope you have stop it...nice one hun...

  • 19 years ago

    by Shy

    Some of the line ends are alittle choppy but over all it's great