It is funny through most of your poem you are saying this person took but yet what they took you willingly gave (line 8) as though trying to blame your own actions on someone else. Though I still liked the poem the contradictions remind me of the girl who cried wolf. Not trying to be rude just stating what it makes me feel.

I actually really liked it. u gave willingly, but they left you there alone. It is emotional pain am i correct? don't worry if i'm wrong, i love dit all anyway.
- Suzie

AWSOME, dude very strong and excellent flow. One of the best poems I have read in a long time!

I Think when we all write poems about being used or about pain we can tend to jump from one feeling to other without even noticing it. But isn't that what makes a great poem? I think so. i like contradicting myself i figured its the ony way i can find answers with in me and by myself without anyones help. your poem is great. i like. It really makes feel your pain by reading it. i also have been used so much by girls and i can totally understand your message about how it feels to be used.

Hey hun...i'm really sori abt wat happened n it made me cry i hav tears down my cheeks lol..oops i shudnt b laughing anyway as i sed b4 if u need to tlk ma adey is dia_boy_crazy@hotmail.com n really i am really sori...i hope u'l feel beter soon

I really liekd this poem..it was really to the point..it it made me feel what u were feling..sorri for al the hurt n pain u've ben thru...but riting is a good way to express urself....maybe u shouldn't give in to ne body until ur 100% sure u can trust them all the way,w ith ur life and everything...but stilll very good poem..keep it up!!
*rates 4*
meg

Woah, great flow and very nicely written... it didnt seem like you were contradicting yourself at all

*jackie*

Oh how sad..5/5 again tho..gr8 poem!
~*Who Cares?*~

I love your poems so much. *5/5*

Im just wondering if this is true.
Im always here for you Rubz
Love ya and this poem was flawless
~Em

Really powerfull.. the flow was amazing.... great job!