Wow this was wow ! It made me a lil upset but this was brillant full of emotion !!
Keep up the masterpieces!!
Luv
Crystal

Dont give up..
My love die 4 week ago,and i still try to not give up!

U'll find ur love somewhere else..
Keep searching!

Boo, hahaha scared you lol. Great poem hun, very touching, i can only try and understand what your going through, seems like what your going throuh is harder than what i've gone through, but if you ever want to talk and i'm not on the chat you have my e-mail, and you know you always have at least someone in your life who loves you. And btw, i think he's an idiot for throwing you away, especially after bieng with you for two years, you two shared alot, i think it will be very hard for either of you two to find someone who is as good as the other (hope that made sense lol)

Well ill probably comment most of your poems! LOL! but Jeeze i kno exactly how you feel, exept for i was the one to leave. But this is great also

I like this poem, i think it truly shows how you feel and it is really cool. I never thought someone could go through so much pain, i'm sry.

Good Luck,
~Sweetpea~

Ohhh;; that's a sad poem but i like it,,, i can tell you know how to write your poems with alot of emotion (5)

HEY ASH! guess who, I really enjoyed it! Now Im no one to give advice! but if ya just need somebody to talk to then, just write me! O, and Ill write a reply to that poem on my site! so if you want to see the poem from his point of view! than come read. it ill try to put myself in his shoes and make it a happy ending! muah kisses and hugs!! keep in touch..

~eddy~