Great poem!! a nice change to see another side to the griving gf story. it was wonderfuly writen

Ruby

Thanks for reading my poems your are excellent! I'm writing some more at the moment and I hope you are too.

Pretty good, nice rhyming and rhythm through out, great write

This had a really good flow to it. You write so many pieces of writings on different topics but always push through the emotion to it.

Kat

I liked the twist at the end - Although it's hard to determine the tense and perspective of the poem. However, well written.

Peace. [Sole]