by Lady Vengeance Oct 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Love has twisted all my truth's |
You may have noticed that I havent commented on some I have a very good reason too, |
Great poem, very realistic and builds like a story board of picture in my mind, good work |
Your not a trophy, people dont give away the greatest gift of all as a prize. |
by *mishelle*
Great poem, strong and effective. 5/5. take care! |
by ShadowDancer
Once again, your style of writing is really effective. you have a good understanding of language, which makes it easier for the reader to connect. wonderful work once again |