Aww, how sad, i really really like it!!

Aww, how sad, i really really like it!!

Once again, your style of writing is really effective. you have a good understanding of language, which makes it easier for the reader to connect. wonderful work once again

Ruby

Great poem, strong and effective. 5/5. take care!

Your not a trophy, people dont give away the greatest gift of all as a prize.
Love you xoxo

Great poem, very realistic and builds like a story board of picture in my mind, good work

You may have noticed that I havent commented on some I have a very good reason too,
It keeps logging me out Im sorry if you are disappointed
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oh well I tried
I love this poem it does create like a picture in your mind and I agree with matt no one would give away such a great person like yourself
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