Blades

by Switchblade89   Oct 7, 2005


Blood slowly drips as the blade breaks skin,
tears and fears rush out as it slides more in,
to talk about your depression, doesn't work, it's defective,
a blade is so much better, so simple, so effective,

A thin piece of metal, a razor, or a knife,
helps you through depression for the rest of your life,
it gets you through all the days that you cry,
it helps you get past all the days that go by,

You pull the razor out and make a quick slice,
still feeling depressed, you cut yourself twice,
the blood flows out, like a red river,
a simple but effective relief to depression, a razor,

A blade is a friend, who comes when you want,
resistance to temptation, it gives you a taunt,
it says "don't talk of depression, it doesn't work, it's defective,
I'm so much better, so simple, so effective,"

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  • 16 years ago

    by A F

    Great poem.
    I so can totally relate to this.
    Especially on this part:
    A blade is a friend, who comes when you want,
    resistance to temptation, it gives you a taunt,
    it says "don't talk of depression, it doesn't work, it's defective,
    I'm so much better, so simple, so effective,"

    Loving it <3
    xxx.

  • 18 years ago

    by pale angel

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!
    keep this up it is great
    heather

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxc4ndyang3lxox

    I have a question.. Are u a cutter because you said that you write your feeling on paper so im just curious

  • Painfully familiar, hit very close to home. you put it on paper so so so well. amazing poem. talent dude. true talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Awesome..Robert..it kinda sounds like some of my poems..lol.....say hi to Switchblade for me..DIJL...Joclyn