Very dark for you.Its good and very sad. Some parts sounds like my poems. Write more poems. b(

Robert, that was a great poem. Matt is right, it is unlike your others, but it does give off a certain edge to you poetry. Nice work!

-Jennifer.

Nice peom and rimes

Hey...i hope you didn't cut yourself...and who says cutting is better than talking...stay strong...okey...if you need to talk...feel free to email me at jane_fairies@hotmail.com...okey...you are a sweet guy...so be happy...

Cool...I thought this was excellent. It was a dark write and the words just smoothly flowed together. Great job. My favorite lines were:
"don't talk of depression, it doesn't work, it's defective,
a blade is so much better, so simple, so effective"
They just seemed so good and yet so cool.
~Disturbed Unknown

Love it....I now how it is and thats a great way to write it in a poem. It flows..i like that alot and it has alot of meaning to it. Keep it up
Juls

HEY BABE well it's me well am here for you to take away you pain to brighten up you darkest days just know am here for you and remember i love you bye now
from you love mya

I like your rhyming scheme it makes the piece flow nicely. Unfortunately what you write about is very true :(
Nice job.

Suicide isn't my bag...but the rhymes were good...i haven't ever read any of your work but this one's good...in a sense...just not my style..but hey..keep your head up..hit me back...peace

Awesome..Robert..it kinda sounds like some of my poems..lol.....say hi to Switchblade for me..DIJL...Joclyn

Painfully familiar, hit very close to home. you put it on paper so so so well. amazing poem. talent dude. true talent.

I have a question.. Are u a cutter because you said that you write your feeling on paper so im just curious

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!
keep this up it is great
heather

Great poem.
I so can totally relate to this.
Especially on this part:
A blade is a friend, who comes when you want,
resistance to temptation, it gives you a taunt,
it says "don't talk of depression, it doesn't work, it's defective,
I'm so much better, so simple, so effective,"

Loving it <3
xxx.