Hey this is a really good poem, its well written and its not too long like some of mine so it can keep you interested, well done.

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Dat iz sum heapz good shit!!!luved it

Wow man that was fricken AWESOME! good job well done! i love the ryhming! nice descriptive words there

Very deep.. good job 5/5

Fantastic, You have a real talent for writing, It flows beautifully.
Keep up the excellent work

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