Amazing poem, I really thin the diction and structure is ace! the topic is always a sad one tho=(

Thankyou for the comment on For Aidyn I know know its flow sucks, Im not very good at writing happish poems, if you have time maybe check out my other stuff? but yeh keep up the great work:)

Jenn

Great poem, a strong message and strong emotions portrayed. My only suggestion, would be to separate the different points of view, just to add a bit more clarity, but that's just me nitpicking...excellent poem.

Thanks very much for your comment on the Misjudged. If I can ask a favour, I'm posting a poem within the next few days called "the Spectre", and, well, I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism on it. Thanks again, and keep writing!

OMG...is this true...who are you talking about....your friends? Tell me okey...i'll check others later...