Love it. alot of emotion there. very well written

Ruby

Wow your really good i love your flow and your style it's diffrent and thats kool keep up the good work 5.5

Every poem of urs is fabulous..u have a wonderous gift, i hope u use it throughout ur entire life...5/5 4 sure. i wood kill 2 write half as good as u!
~*Who Cares?*~

Another awesome poem. I like how each line is short and abrupt, giving the poem so much emotion and heart, keep it up, my friend
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Wow...dark,emotional, well written, nice choice of words, 5/5

This is definatley a favorite, really good work here you have got definatley got some talent! I think you should call "Potential life". ONce again, kudos to you it was awesome!

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-annmarie

Another masterpiece. well done. the short phrases set this one off well, good job.
Driver

Wow. I love your poems. *Giggles* They make me just want to read them over and over and over again, and never stop. :)

Wow. thats all i can say. this is so beautifully written and i didnt want it to end.amazing job. u captured me in ur poem. so beautiful well done. keep it up! smile* ps thanx for ur comment on my poem:)

Awesome poem! 5/5 if i were to titie it i would call it wicked death. but thats jus me. great job 5/5 u deserve no less!

Amazing poem I really like this one. The short lines were so effective and the rhyming was good too. A lot of emotion in it, a very strong poem. Take care,
- polly

Very nice poem very creative and enjoyable? i guess you could say

I really liked this poem!! it was very vibrant! p.s. sure u can use that line 'your whole body soaked in it'! Thanks for asking!

Another great poem with a 5/5 from me.

Waiting and watching,
Crying and screaming,
Silence of heart,
And broken dreaming.

^Favorite Part^

Amazing. 5/5

Sweet. i really like this poem :)