Very good job, Another song well written! lol I love it
Keep writing

That was great...u're 'over him'...hmm jos!! lol
nice poem tho...
love u xoxo

Nice job.. i hope your righ ti hope it does get better 5.5

Nice ... it has a lot of meaning & depth... but why dont YOU write more poems ...that it being just songs ?
i still loved reading this
5/5
love
amy