Each night..

by amelia   Oct 7, 2005


Each night you make me cry
each night i want to die..
I use a sharp sharp blade
To correct the mistakes I've made.
I watch as my tears & blood flow
it really hurts me you know?
The pain shoots up my arm
but i want to do more harm.
I'm not done..
I'm not through...
because I'm still here
breathing without you !
i wait each night till i fall down weak
but its YOU my heart does seek..
Can i change my past ?
why did you leave so fast?
when you left you took along my life..
all that you left here is a soul with a knife !

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  • 17 years ago

    by kenzie

    This is an amazing poem. I loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww, This was sad! Really good though! =]

    I noticed you havn't written a poem in quite awhile =[ I hope you start writing again, Your poems are great!

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey, wow amazing poem! It flowed so well together and had alot of depth. I really liked the lines:

    "I'm not done..
    I'm not through...
    because I'm still here
    breathing without you !"

    I don't know why but it caught me off guard, i can really relate to those lines. Well said. Keep up the awesome work. 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Alot of the rhyming was too predictable and at times felt forced I kinda have the predictable rhyming too.
    But i guess it doesnt make the poem bad just need to extend our vocabulary lol i dunno
    But yea the poem it was so sad and i felt like this at one point but i found someone who picked up the pieces maybe you will too. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Thanks for taking the time to read my poem, you're really talented, keep it up

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