Ouch...it sounded rather painful, like deep, heart-felt pain. I enjoyed the rhythm, but very dark. It is a topic that has been mulled over many, many times.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow I can relate to that great write hun!

~natalie

Sweet...and holds very deep meaning...i love it...you are so cool...continue writing...5/5.

This is about him again huh?
I love the emotion you put into your poems.
I hope things get better betweet you two

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Hey! no i didnt forget you! lol i just haven't written anything lately so i haven't been on this site!! thanks for the comment! and your poem is awesome! i dont see how peeps rhyme every two lines and makei twasesome, thats incredible, i wish I could do that, no seirously! lol but grea tjob! 5/5

This is soooo beautiful...and yet soooo sad. i don't have anything against ppl who cut cuz i know i've done it in the past but i realized that its not the solution...you are very creative in this poem which is why i gave you a 5/5....u deserved it and never give up...i believe in u...kisses

Wonderful poem dear, such emotion and sadness really got to me. I hope your okay, I am having a bad day, so sorry if my comment is a little idiodic.

Ps: Thanks for ALL your comment I really appricaeit them. (Also I spelled Appricieat wrong) ^_^

This poems reminds me so much of when i used to be a cutter. the lines
I'm not done..
I'm not through...
because I'm still here
breathing without you !
really made me think about my past. Excellent poem.

~Anthony

Hey,nice poem,the emotion is deep. It makes you think, which you don't get out of alot of peoms. Keep writing, cya-p.s read some of my poems

Wow. i really liked your poem.. and like a quote i once read" dont cry over anyone, who wont cry over you"... so basically dont feel for this guy, if he doesnt feel for you, to just leave you there hurt. i mean no matter what your going to be hurt since u really seemed to like this guy, but give it time, make changes in your life, little changes that help you forget him..... i really liked the line "I'm not done..
I'm not through...
because I'm still here
breathing without you !"

it just proves that you can still get on without him, and there will be a better day... its very well put togeather, and i liked yr rhyming sceme you used.. keep up the good work.... and keep your head high... please comment on my poems.. either Reckless Emotion, or Killing me Softly.. which ever one ud like. both if you are really bored lol.. thanks --Falling

Wow ameila.. that was a reallie awesome poem about cutting.. it describes it so well.. i loved reading it off to read another! 5/5!

This is an excellent poem. Very emotional and powerful, with excellent diction. You definitely are one of my favourite writers on this site.

Pretty good job, a few things though
Try~ watching as my blood tears flow
it really hurts me don't you know?
*it seems to flow better, there were some other places that you imrove the flow

Keep it up

Another great poem... i'm adding you to my favourites!! :)
take care, xoxoxo

Aww.. that was so deep, i lykd it, ur rhyme was reli gud, abd ur last line was breath-taking
keep up the gud work
Nannoush

This is an AMAZING poem! I can relate to it, too. I felt like that a while ago. You put the feelings into words well! Awesome job, keep up the good work!
Love always,
~BJ~

I agree with Falling Up, and with that quote. If he doesn't care.. he's not worth it. Just go on. I love your work, Amy, it's just amazing--5/5, great emotions and feelings there.

Amazing poem xxxx

Understand compleatly loved it 15/5 all the way keep writing loved it new fav definatly

It's all true that guys that make you do that is so not worth it but sometimes you don't realized until your bleeding on the floor crying for help. i hope your doing okay. You did an amazing job on this. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.