Wow I like this one, it's very true and nicely written.

Fantastic. You've hit the nail on the head. I'm very impressed.

Hey russell that one is really good keep it up

Wow...thats good...

Hey I like your poems very much! You're great! Keep it up and thanks for your comment!

Well written for the truth behind these lines. You had the message sprawl strongly through this poem. And your ending strikes something so true every girl should keep that in mind. This is an amazing piece, thanks for sharing. =)

Very nice job! All the words just seemed to flow and you got your point accross to the reader in a excellent way! 5/5

Very nice job! All the words just seemed to flow and you got your point accross to the reader in a excellent way! 5/5

Actually we're all perfect in out flawed ways. I think you could have tried to go into more emotional detail, something alot of people find hard to do, because just have action may not always be enough. You managed to get your point across though.