Wow, i gotta say you do have talent. while your haveattitude for a 13 year old..lol. dont worry, nothigns wrong with attitude, i think its awesome! and i look how you can show your attitude in your poems, it makes you more unique! consindering your age you are extremly talented. keep it up, one day, you'll go far!

~*Aww that was so sad...im srry about ur friend..well stay strong and great work*~ XoXo

Great poem!! i love this poem and i love it so much i can't stop reading it! thanks for your comment! I will give 5+++++! love it! write more!

Wow that is good for u only being 13 awsum poem tho...

I really liked this poem... your words flow nicely and you keep in edge so it lets people know where you comin from... and ppl can relate ...great job

I really like this poem, it shows a lot of expression and is very well-written. And, I've been through the same thing, so, I understand... I'll be here to listen, if you need a friend... **Hugs**

You have a talent that goes far beyond your years. please keep writing i know we`ll be hearing about you in years to come

Nice poem.Thanx for the comment you made about mine...I am sorry you feel that way I hope it gets better

You are a very good writer 5/5(Wayyy better than Jay)

Great poem. You are a really good writer. Hope you keep it up, and like they said, your talent can get you far in life.