Whoa.. that was really really good, the flow was.. i can't even explain it, I mean i've read some good poems today, but this is definatly the best one i've read tonight, you really expressed your emotion in it, and the lines, there was no rhyming yet it flowed so well it didn't need it, and your choice of words, i loved it, it was easy to understand and got your point across without being one bit confusing, I think you did a great job, 5/5

I truly enjoyed your poem. It flowed beautifully. It was sinply told and yet it still had a huge impact. Top stuff

Dood i flippenlove this poem like crazee.