by Rusted x Heart Oct 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Show these words just how to mean, |
I'm hoping you've found someone to "show you" since this write. You're really very talented and I enjoy reading your poems. Overall it flowed flawlessly until the last line. I'm not sure of the change there. But good job. |
by Loulou
Funny so many people comment yet so few votes well this one as always is so very good great job |
by Gemmie Lou
Gr8 poem really liked it an cheers 4 d comment on my poem!!! |
by Andrea
Very good, i liked it alot. |
by N J Thornton
This is a very moving poem indeed. I know I said constructive criticism but I'm finding it difficult to offer anything but praise. The poem was well written and thought out. I liked especially how you went through the entire body and emotions asking to be shown. The flow was almost faultless too. |