Jamie i think u should call this poem It's Ok To Cry!

Looks liek you got a pretty good title. I like this poem but the rhyming was a little off. still good job though!

The main point i got was that love does hurt but it only makes your more wise when it ends, keep your head up and keep up the good work

Awsome write, alot of guys can't write and put emotion into it .

Imma chick!! lol

Hmm. I liked it. It was kinda weird at the beggining but ,it makes sense. Keep up the good work.
xoxMegxox

I like this poem ....dont get me wrong I just think it is a bit difficult to read because the flow is off. However it has a great concept and it is a great read. You are very talented and keep the work up.
Donna

Thats so sad and true.... 5/5