It could have a better flow and some things could be added in it to make it a lil better. other than that, you got the point across. lol
~BJ~

ITS DEFINATELY ABOUT ASH!
lol
i loved it not your best but i loved it
ttyl love ya lots babe
*HUGS*
-Tess-

Joe,
I thought it was a nice poem, Keep it up sweetheart, know that im always here for you.
-Love Ashley

This does not suk...it is very good actually. i really like it and i know u really like her cuz i mean u were the one to c her first...i can c that u care about a certain someone...keep it up...5/5
kisses

I thought it was very good!! The song that is by Kenny Chesney, You had me from hello, is goin to be the 1st song me and my fiance will dance to as hubby and wife on June 10 06