Pessimistic

by Jamie   Oct 8, 2005


Really stupid again but what can i say

My legs are shaking
So are my hands
Im trying to get it
But I cant understand

I wish tears would come
To distract me from you
But Im entirely too numb
And you dont have a clue

Im gonna scream
The stars out of the sky
Scratch till Im bloody
Still waiting for a reply

I want to have a reason
Any reason at all
Just to talk to you
God, I wish you would call

That would be a miracle
But dreams dont come true
Whats good doesnt last
So dont try to pursue

People eventually die
So why start to care?
Build up your tolerance
And always be aware

People are out to get you
They want you to break
Only care about themselves
Theyre all so f.u.c.king fake

So might as well just end it now
But i'm scared to make the scar
Wonder what would happen after I died
Because I'm just as selfish as they are

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    That was so awesome! loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow that poem was awesome! it was anything but stupid! i really loved this stanza~

    I wish tears would come
    To distract me from you
    But Im entirely too numb
    And you dont have a clue

    def. a 5/5 nice job your so talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow that was honestly one of the best poems i've ever read...ah!!
    i just loved the truth in it all..the hurt... it was all so well shown. but please don't think everyone's like that!!
    i really loved the last line...its so true yet no-one thinks about it that way..
    great job *still speachless!!*
    xoxoxox 5/5
    you're so on my favs!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    I 100% agree with u...great poem once again....my fav. part was

    "People are out to get you
    They want you to break
    Only care about themselves
    Theyre all so f.u.c.king fake"

    very very very true....but u know not all ppl are the same...keep it up and get at me when u need help or something...kisses

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Wow i really like this hun. it seems all your poems have great emotion and a great vocabulary. 5/5 xox

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