Wow quite a few swears there lol. I didn't understand entirely why its a romance but o well. And your poems are very well written:)

Well its in the sub category of "desired love" so its not so much a love poem more of an angry i hate you for not locing me poem

Nice job i love it when you say "I tried biting out my heart
But my mouth couldnt reach"

the was kool and when you said it didnt rhyme haha and that you didnt care poems dont need to rhyme to be poems. niec job keep it up

Definately Not your best...I dunno why....But I still had to give you a 5/5 because the rest of your poems just kick major fuc kin a ss!

I'm not quite sure who you were talking about, But i liked the flow, and the emotion.

Interesting wording...but still really good

Wow i really like this poem also, because it actually makes sense of things.. like, writting poems makes me feel better, but why? its just writting your feelings down... like, no one is going to be able to help me through my problems anyways, cause who is honestly going to hear me ? but sitll it helps, and i dont know why. but i love this poem so much.

Wow Jamie very nice poem and yopur far from retarded lol.. that was a wonderful poem... 5/5!

That is so true. i can understand this. i jsut sometimes wish, he would read these poems, and i know he'd know its for him. i could only hope... 5/5