Comments : Tomboy

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Awww wow this is me too. No seriously the first few stanzas especially was me, well when I was younger anyway. I always wore red, my hair is naturally curly and when I was little i just tied it back. I hated dolls and would spend my days climbing trees. Great. I really enjoyed this poem, it let me know I'm not alone. Although I'll just say I'm not like that anymore, because I'm a little big to climb trees...Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awwwww!!! JJ this peice was so sweet, cute, well written, beutiful, I loved it!!! I admire people like you who take others peoples thoughts and throw them away! Everyone is beautiful whehter your preppy, gothic, a tomboy, ghetto, it doesn't matter we're all human and all gorgeous! Everyone has their own opnions and ideas and own likes and dislikes and if box cars and horses are what you like, you keep those dreams girl! I loved this peice it really was inspring! Great write!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    This should be in a novel. You are gifted and you should definetely be a famous author or something. Check out my poem called "innocence" :)

    Ana*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Well done! loved it! lol made me smile so big after reading that because even though it seems like everyone above was saying that they were like a tomboy i kinda was when i was little too! i love horases too such fun to ride it's peaceful and exciting at the same time. never liked pink or purple. it's always blue, black, green lol those kind.

    wonderful job.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    JJ,
    This was a great poem...sounds like my Granddaughter.
    She loves to be girlish but she's truly a country girl and a
    Tomboy at heart....I loved this....

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 19 years ago

    by dora

    0h well d0ne girl!! t0uching lines.
    very well written! keep em c0ming
    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • Hey this is me too...I love to play sports and I can't stand girly things they are annoying...Great poem girl...This is really cool...You know what i noticed being a tomboy? Guys seem to hang out with you more and like you more when you like thier kind of things...awesome job...5/5.
    Crystal

  • 19 years ago

    by Sara

    This pioem describes me exactly! every single peice of it.. great job! I give this a 10/10! Love, Sara

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcy

    You write good, it was nice i liked it. please check out my newest poem I'll love you forever and and a day

    *Marcy*

  • 19 years ago

    by judith howard

    That was great it sounds like what i do

  • 19 years ago

    by Lu

    JJ....
    I really loved this poem .... No dollies and pretty dresses for me when I was young ... dinky cars and jeans and t's is what I preferred ...
    Brought me way back to those days I loved....

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    I'm that girl too, all my life i was one of the guys...as i grew up and started dating, they protected me, but to this day i still play wiht bugs and get dirty and play the sports all day long. Great poem i can really relate.

  • 19 years ago

    by My soul is forever broken

    YAY I FOUND SUMONE LIKE ME.. lol. its hard to do that now days. because their mostly preps and goth and that but ive only found a few tomboys well i luved ur poem keep it up.

    ~my soul is forever broken~

  • 19 years ago

    by lauren

    I really like that..its just like how i am hehe comment back plz

  • 19 years ago

    by annemarie

    That is so like me cept for the curly hair other than that that describes me its very well written

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    JJ
    This poem is great if I didnt know any better I would think you was talkimg about me when I was a little girl. Love it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow, it's nice to see not everyone chooses pink over red....keep up the good work I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    Awesome poem.. describes a lot of tomboys out there who arent afraid of getting dirty.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    I LOVED THIS POEM! so true:)