by N J Thornton
Awww wow this is me too. No seriously the first few stanzas especially was me, well when I was younger anyway. I always wore red, my hair is naturally curly and when I was little i just tied it back. I hated dolls and would spend my days climbing trees. Great. I really enjoyed this poem, it let me know I'm not alone. Although I'll just say I'm not like that anymore, because I'm a little big to climb trees...Well done. |
by Chelsey
Awwwww!!! JJ this peice was so sweet, cute, well written, beutiful, I loved it!!! I admire people like you who take others peoples thoughts and throw them away! Everyone is beautiful whehter your preppy, gothic, a tomboy, ghetto, it doesn't matter we're all human and all gorgeous! Everyone has their own opnions and ideas and own likes and dislikes and if box cars and horses are what you like, you keep those dreams girl! I loved this peice it really was inspring! Great write! |
by Ana Vidovic
This should be in a novel. You are gifted and you should definetely be a famous author or something. Check out my poem called "innocence" :) |
by Jacklyn
Well done! loved it! lol made me smile so big after reading that because even though it seems like everyone above was saying that they were like a tomboy i kinda was when i was little too! i love horases too such fun to ride it's peaceful and exciting at the same time. never liked pink or purple. it's always blue, black, green lol those kind. |
by Ann Stareyes
JJ, |
by dora
0h well d0ne girl!! t0uching lines. |
Hey this is me too...I love to play sports and I can't stand girly things they are annoying...Great poem girl...This is really cool...You know what i noticed being a tomboy? Guys seem to hang out with you more and like you more when you like thier kind of things...awesome job...5/5. |
by Sara
This pioem describes me exactly! every single peice of it.. great job! I give this a 10/10! Love, Sara |
by Marcy
You write good, it was nice i liked it. please check out my newest poem I'll love you forever and and a day |
That was great it sounds like what i do |
by Lu
JJ.... |
by Amy
I'm that girl too, all my life i was one of the guys...as i grew up and started dating, they protected me, but to this day i still play wiht bugs and get dirty and play the sports all day long. Great poem i can really relate. |
YAY I FOUND SUMONE LIKE ME.. lol. its hard to do that now days. because their mostly preps and goth and that but ive only found a few tomboys well i luved ur poem keep it up. |
by lauren
I really like that..its just like how i am hehe comment back plz |
by annemarie
That is so like me cept for the curly hair other than that that describes me its very well written |
JJ |
by Ashley
Wow, it's nice to see not everyone chooses pink over red....keep up the good work I love it! |
Awesome poem.. describes a lot of tomboys out there who arent afraid of getting dirty. |
by Christine
I LOVED THIS POEM! so true:) |