Comments : Asleep

  • 19 years ago

    by Shuuu

    Hey, it's moonlightrose from Chat. Wow, your poem rocks! :P Talk to ya later, xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    So good, Josh! Good job writing it! I really liked it a lot! My favorite stanza was:

    "All the happiness and sensations I feel
    tricks my mind into thinking it's all real
    With each dream that seems to last forever
    I'd swear this time we're really together"

    It was wonderful! Good job and keep up the great work!

    ~BJ~