by Atomic Oct 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Sweet caresses of the night. |
Good emtotion |
by The Wingless
This poem was great, but isn't it in the wrong place? I really like the poem but I think there is one verse that throws me off, call me stupid but: |
by ShadowDancer
Nice. very intense for the first half, then as the poem moved on to the next day, cooling off. great work, nice flow and style |
Fabulous again. u cood go sumwhere with ur poetry. seriously. keep up the gr8 work! |
by sami
Thats really good |