Waass uppp Atomic, well u know sorry for your takin ure signature but it was funny. but anywayz good poem, had nice flow and everything 5/5 keepz it up

Atomic? What have -YOU- been doing? LOL This has got to be my favorite poem that you've wrote so far. And To think you worte this... just the -YOU- wrote it. I would have never thought it in you. Great job!

~Anthony©

Well carried in flow, and well imagined in speech. Conceptually perfect.

Aww, this is like one of my favorite poems out of all my friends. I love, love poems. ^^ Great job dear.

xxMegxx

WOW, I get what you mean, erotic but not tooooooooooooooooo explicit. WOW, so... good poem. OK, I shall consider your comments when writing my next poem. Also, about my infidelity, it's cyber, what else do you want???? Ok, thanks for liking my poetry in the end, this I assume since you commented on all of my poems...

Well, it certainly presented a beautiful picture...but a little *mature* for me, I think.

Good Writing!
beth

I love it... i can relate to it so much... "awaits patiently for a twisted fate" is my favorite line

Allora, non lo so, tu parlai italiano?
Per che sempre dici Arrivederci, splicami. Well, actually this is Corsican, but you may get the idea. Ok, thanks for reading half!!!!! of my poems!!!!

This poem is so deep...the details are amazing. You have a true gift and are an amzing poet. I look foward to reading one of your poetry books one day! Thanks for sharing it with the world. Donna

Don't worry, I still love you even if you are not Italian enough for me!

Cuddling in the center.
When spaces are abound.
Rough hands became gentler.
Speaking with no sound.

Favorite stanza! Simply great.

Atomic,

Wow this was one lovely little write. I like the flow!

Warm regards,

Steve

Exquisite poem. most wonderful job. kudos!!!

This is a great poem!

Wow...this poem was a true pleasure to read. Great craftmanship of your words, beautiful imagery. 5/5 I enjoyed this keep it up!

Amazing. And you said your poems couldn't even compare to mine. Mine sucks compared to yours. lol. =]. Excellent flow and use of words. I could never write as well as you do. Good Job. infinite/5. =]. *waves*

-PassingAngel

Good poem I love it

Omg the best poem that i have read yet

Very beautiful. love it a lot

Wow - that is amazing. Very talented indeed!