WOW.. i loved it!! very good use of words! well done!!

Thats really good
keep it up

Fabulous again. u cood go sumwhere with ur poetry. seriously. keep up the gr8 work!
~*Who Cares?*~

Nice. very intense for the first half, then as the poem moved on to the next day, cooling off. great work, nice flow and style

Ruby

This poem was great, but isn't it in the wrong place? I really like the poem but I think there is one verse that throws me off, call me stupid but:

A single night of wonderful bliss.
Forever and a day of remembrance.
On the morrow, nothing is amiss.
Never again this hypnotic trance.

I dunno, it's most likely just me, rembrance and trance seems forced, they rhyme in lettering but not when you say it, because most people say it like:
Remembrence

so with remembrance and trance they have to say

RemembrANCE

Great poem though.

Good emtotion
~shanny~