Awwwwww
thats so sad
thats how i feel a lot of the time alone
loved this one gr8 work keep it up

love andrea xxxx

Great poem! not your best, but still really good. keep it up!
-xXx-

Gr8 stuff

Aww thats so sad, but its sweet too, you did a good job, the ending went down VERY smoothly, and I liked it alot, 5/5

Hey, that was so sad and touching.
and you wrote it as well as your other
poems. I mean wonderfully.
much love,
marjan

That was a great poem....5/5 thanx for voting on mine..i thought i would return the favore.

I really love this poem. You are good. Thank you for your comments on my poems it really meant to me. And yes it is true. All my poems are based on my life, it is the only way for me to express myself. And i see, you are good at it too! Keep writing!

Heya again, Yeah this is a really good poem.. Very sad but I understand.
The flow was great and I really enjoyed reading it well done!

Keep it up x)