Hmmmm, geez that person would have to be a complete idiot (that used to be a swear word) to ever leave you. That was a great poem by teh way babe. Love you xoxo |
by Natalie
:O That was really good! I just love reading poems like this that express also how I feel. Awesome Job! Thanks for commenting on my latest poem :) |
~*Aww that was so sweet n sad at the same time...i love ya work ur really great keep it up and thx so much 4 the comments they really meant alot!*~ XoXo |
by ShadowDancer
Great work once again. this one uses rhyming without becoming corny. its great, and the idea of it is wonderful |
I agree 100% great work once again by the ultimate suz |
Awesome way of telling that sometimes the person you love doesn't love you back. Short and sad, and I'm loving it! |
Different setout, worx well i think, good one |
by Sole
Heh . . again, I can really relate. This poem struck me really hard . . . It was short but very to the point again - excellently written, absorbs the reader wholey. |