Confusion

by kida   Oct 8, 2005


I love you
no i love him
say i love you
while i think of him.

kissing you
wishing your lips were his
hugging you
but think of this.

you are so nice
simple and sweet,
hes cold as ice
and says I'm a geek.

you asked me out
and i said yes,
he gave me a clout
in the side of my head.

you make me laugh
he makes me cry
i have to ask
my heart why.

i fell for him
and this i knew
i fell for him
it was never you.

but your so nice,
yes your so sweet
hes cold as ice,
but makes my heart beat.

its over with him,
this i must accept
but i love him,
this i must admit.

ill never tell you
how much he means to me
never tell you
that in my mind its him i sneak out to see.

i love you
if any one asks
i love you
as among the stars we dance.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Standing Strong

    5/5 good poem well written my favorite of yours

  • 19 years ago

    by Aonica

    Hey i finally got to read your comment thanks... well i love the poem it was great!!! it reminded me of my life and this guy i love..my first love and my ex..dont you just hate to see the one you love with someone else and its so hard to think that you could ever be with someone else and think that theres no one better but then you end up finding the one that wins over your heart and STILL makes you think of EVERYTHING that you and your ex (luke..for you) did and it just hurts doesnt it... well send me a message sometime...heres my aim...ilovemeaonie@aol.com or indepndentgrl15@aol.com..thanks again great poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Tisha

    I thought that poem was very good .. I like your style ...Keep up the great work..Also thanks for commenting on my poem...
    Tisha

  • 19 years ago

    by Mel

    Again, very clever and to the point. We can't deceive our own heart/s can we.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kimura

    That was really good!!! is it like wots happening in your life? so good. taking stuff from life to make it more real. !