I really like this poem, it deffinetly gets your mind wondering and leaves a bit of room for you to put your imagination into it to.
its really dark and mysterious.
wonderful job. 5/5

Damn right you're going back to Hell. It's excellent.

My faviourite line:

"Death wants to know if I bleed
Black."

Nice imagery.

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I liked this a lot... Mercedes

I love your poems.... maybe we can talk and find out whose behind each others poems... msn messanger-destroyedhopes@hotmail.com.....
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