by Valeria Oct 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
U broke my heart into million pieces...and u just cannot see ..i want to be with u forever but that could never be. |
by TinyDancer46
Hun...you are so talented. This poem is amazing, so I hope that you keep on writing. |
by Lola Granny
This was real good only suggestion is to cap the I's other than that it was a good poem keep up great writting |
by amanda
The poem is really good for your first poem i have a boy im crazy bout 2 but doesnt even notice me |