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by Anthony Oct 8, 2005 category : Love, romance / secret love
You and me, me and her, Thoughts and feelings just a blur. A choice, a chance, Our sweet romance, The pain of a heart An emotional strain. Out of tears, out of time. Past the climax of our prime Who knows what the world will bring? My love, your love, her love, they sting. This ain't the bachelor, I'm not Evan. Count to ten, look to heaven. All I need is just one sign But there is none, this choice is mine. My soul is a ship on life's vast sea, But stuck in place because there's only me. Though some consider her the male's Holy Grail, You are the wind that lets my ship sail...
by Atomic
An absolutely wonderful job. All except: "The pain of a heart An emotional strain." You rhymes every two sentences, and that just threw everything off. ( )_( ) (='.'=) (")-(") Arrivederci!