I like the way you get your anger out. It`s a good poem and I rated it 5/5 it had meaning.

Wow awsome choice of wording ! 5/5

Great Job...AT first I didnt know where you were going with it but in the end good job...
5/5
BUt in the 6th Stanza, 4th line is Hire suppose to be Higher????

It is a very good peom flows nicely, uhm, look foward to reading more of your poems.
xoxMegxox

At first i didnt really understand it but then i started to after i kept reading. great job!

Wow..that was definately dark/deep.
You said you weren't good:O you're awesome!!
i loved the choice of words and the rhyming.
Great work and take care xoxo

You said your no good? you need your head examined lol. this was awesome though i like the last stanza it explained where it was all going and really concluded it well 5/5 xox

Awwwww...diis is sooooo sad...and i respect u for writing so beautifully...keep it up...your work it really can't be replaced....ur very talented...keep it up 5/5

Wow! The first thing I thought of was the salem witch trials! Awesome. You showcased it very well and put it into your own words. Your sending great message and the poem keeps the reader in surprise! Great read!
Donna

Utterly amazing... so sad. i thought it was so stupid people burning "witches". you portrayed it amazingly. 5/5

Wow i loved reading about this poem it was very nicely written. your are a very expotential poet.. keep up the great work!,off to read more xox

Perfect again :) Your rhymes come so naturally! I'm jealous ha. I can see how carefully you thought about this subject and the comparison is very clever. Well done x

It is nice but you used to many rarly uncommonly used words be cause of this the flow is interupted (even for me and i am a human dictionary) it is hard to relate to a poem when you must look up 90% of the words (or in my case 20%) lol ok well it's still a 4/5