by Truest Lies Oct 8, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Dear tree in the middle of the pavement, |
by Jamie
Yeah didn't exactly get this. i think you need to emphasize more about what exactly the tree is significant for i mean most all trees grow...so why are you comparing your life to this one? once again the messy rhyme scheme brings down the quality of the poem i dont mean to be mean i think you have great ideas and great ways of wording things i just think you really need to work on your form |
by Telecia
I like your poem a lot |
I liked how you constructed this poem, |