Comments : Tree In The Middle of the Pavement

  • 19 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I liked how you constructed this poem,
    loved the msg I can relate
    good write

  • 19 years ago

    by Telecia

    I like your poem a lot

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Yeah didn't exactly get this. i think you need to emphasize more about what exactly the tree is significant for i mean most all trees grow...so why are you comparing your life to this one? once again the messy rhyme scheme brings down the quality of the poem i dont mean to be mean i think you have great ideas and great ways of wording things i just think you really need to work on your form