I saw a broken angel

by Shadow   Oct 8, 2005


I saw a broken angel,
Her wings laid on the ground,
Her heart beside her,
She just laided there without a sound.

Someone didnt love her,
No one loved her anymore,
She now lays in the devils darkness,
Evil to the core.

What was it that made her change?
She was a angel from the start,
Who was the one that hurt her?
Was it you that broke her heart?

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  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. that was reli nice.. i felt it came from the heart.. ur rhyme was also gr8 and the topic was reli wonderful..
    keep goin
    im sorry i cudnt comment on more, but i gtg now.. ill be bak soon
    take care
    Nannoush

  • 19 years ago

    by kraz33 beautiful

    That is a really good poem. Keep up the good work! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Niice;) i love this, excellent

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